Movie pitch Feedback

Movie Pitch Feedback

Individual film pitch from Spagez

The movie we pitched was called 'The Zootastics' and received generally positive feedback with many comments praising the variation of characters and the ideas for marketing receiving an average score of 50 out of 70 and people generally edging towards purchasing the rights to the film.

On the other hand constructive criticism was still received and accepted well by the group as a collective because we too agreed that the parts commented on could have been improved. 

These included the fact that it was very similar to movies of the same genre and age range like 'The Incredibles' that we actually included in related films that inspired us. However as a brief counter-point to this creating a movie that involves action for under 5 year olds is very difficult without having it being relate-able to movies of the same type. However the same cannot be said for the similarities of the characters to that of 'Madagascar' which could have been prevented by further thinking of different tropes for the characters and more in-depth studies of the characters personalities. 

Further drawbacks of our movie pitch was the title as people found it confusing to the action genre as it did not show any kind of similarity to the selected genre. Instead better thought could have been made maybe to the background of the title and a removal of the more childish tropes within it. This could then make it appear more action orientated and show the actual content of the movie.

Contrary to the above praise, some people also found it difficult to follow the amount of characters and of which actor would voice which character. This could be remedied by better presenting the actors on individual terms which would also make explaining the characters better and allow us to make the characters different to similar movies and tropes.

Overall however the movie did need a brief look over to just scrape around the edges and polish it